Sunday, March 4, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday

Well, we're so close to the release of Wilde's Fire. I've been busting my behind, trying to get this book ready for you guys. This could very well be the last Six Sunday before you can run out and *grab* a copy of my debut novel.

Anyway, this week, Kate's a bit emotional. There aren't many words in these six sentences, but I think there are enough for you to understand she's broken.

Enjoy!

~"Give me your hand."

All that blood . . . .

"Kate?"

His smile . . . .

"Can you hear me?"

All our memories.~

Want to get your hands on a copy of Wilde's Fire? Check out www.nobleyoungadult.com. Like trailers? Watch this one.

Check out Six Sunday to read other amazing snippets! *Disclaimer: Not all sites are appropriate for children under 18!*

43 comments:

  1. Evocative six. And *so close* to release day! Are you bouncing off the walls with excitement? ;c) So happy for you!

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    1. I know! Squeee. Can't wait! :-)

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  2. Great six Krystal! I loved your trailer too. I want to read this book!!

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  3. Congrats on the upcoming release! True, not many words but the scene is even more powerful for the brevity. Well done!

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  4. I agree with Silver. The sparse words definitely bring home that feeling of broken that she's experiencing. Well worded and spaced!

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    1. I'm glad her emotions were so well conveyed. :-)

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  5. Congratulations on your release! Quick, but fabulous six :)

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    1. Thank you, Carly! I was worried that, out of context, these might be too short.

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  6. Congrats on the release!! Gonna be a great book! Awesome six!

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    1. Thank you! :-) Especially for the vote of confidence!

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  7. Great six, with short sentences conveying so much.

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  8. She's clearly in shock, and the short sentences convey it well. By the way, my post is up, don't know why the link was removed.

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    1. Argh. Heading over now. I've been tied up with edits the last couple weeks...not much SSS commenting done by me. :( I've missed you all!

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  9. Oh no! What happened? It was something bad.... :(

    Great Six Krystal. :)

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  10. Vivid and spooky, Krystal. Intense six. :)

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  11. Ooh, so mysterious... I wonder what happened?

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    1. Hmm. You don't remember? :-P

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  12. Not many words but much emotion

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  13. Goes to show it doesn't take a lot words to convey meaning. Congrats on the upcoming debut.

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    1. All in how you use them! Thank you. :-)

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  14. Nice job with little words :-)

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  15. Definitely conveys a lot. Well done!

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  16. oh, wow! Haunting! Very poignant!

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    1. Thank you. :-) I like haunting...and poignant!

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  17. Definitely a lot going on in those 6 short sentences.

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    1. Oh yeah, and it only gets worse. muahahha

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  18. They may be short sentences, but they say plenty. :)

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    1. Very short, indeed. If only I could write a whole book that way. haha

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  19. So much emotion in so few words. Well done! :)

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  20. Love how you set this up. Very poetic.

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  21. Wow, very intense! Much luck on your debut release!

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  22. Love these six, Krystal. Very emotional and hard-hitting with so few words!

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