I'm rocket propelling you guys through the book. Today's excerpt comes from one of the later chapters where Kate's world spirals even further out of her control.
I'm not going to give you a set up . . . I'll leave it all to your imagination.
Enjoy!
~ "How could you?" Brad asks, keeping his gaze focused on Arland.
Without a doubt I know Brad is talking to me, but I cannot find the words to respond, cannot find the courage to speak to the guy who’s always been there when I needed him. His question I expected, but this fight I did not.
"When you calm down, she will answer you." Arland’s words ooze with confidence, revealing again why he is a Leader.
A dark look, full of contempt, passes over Brad; he reaches back, preparing to take a swing. ~
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Sunday, January 29, 2012
Six Sentence Sunday
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Is this a love triangle I am sensing? Sighs heavily. Must we stop here?
ReplyDeleteYes, we had to stop there. Don't want to get in trouble with the six sunday crew. ;-)
DeleteWhat tangled webs we weave...
ReplyDeleteOh I do agree! It only gets more intricate. ;-)
DeleteUh oh! Great tension and conflict. I have no idea what your book is about but you've managed to emotionally invest me with just a few words. Great six!
ReplyDeleteI am so glad to hear that! My book will be available soon. And you can check out the blurb under the My Books tab. justsayin. ;-)
DeleteOoooooo what's next? What's next?! lol
ReplyDeleteWell only about another 100 pages of a novel filled with betrayal, magic, love, and loss. YAY! hahaha
DeleteI'm echoing the OOOOOOOOOOOO Looking forward to reading more.
ReplyDeleteWell maybe I'll run a continuation next week?
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ReplyDeleteYou are awesome! Thank you! :-)
DeleteHot-blooded men fighting... Where's more??? :)
ReplyDeleteSoon, Zee, soon! :-)
DeleteSounds like we're in the middle of a brouhaha. Loved your six!
ReplyDeleteDefinitely a bit of a brawl. ;-)
DeleteUh no! A fist fight! Nice job :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Sandra! :-)
DeleteOh, those male egos! Great buildup!
ReplyDeleteMen can be CRAZY when it comes to a woman...especially if one of those men is under influence of a dark source. Muahahha.
DeleteOoh, intriguing six!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Paula!
DeleteVery intriguing! I like the dark look passing over him.
ReplyDeleteIt all goes downhill from there! Thanks Ruthie!
Deletewell done! makes me definitely want to read more
ReplyDeleteI'm here every Sunday...and the book willl be released soon. :-)
DeleteNice six, I love where you cut us off.
ReplyDeleteWhat happens next might surprise you.
DeleteI'm not sure why, but I think I want to punch Arland myself! :-) Great job. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteNOOO! You definitely don't want to punch Arland. Brad on the other hand....
DeleteGetting more interesting every week. Amazing how you can watch the characters bloom, six sentences at a time.
ReplyDeleteI definitely like that you didn't use a set up because the scene speaks for itself, Krystal. Love the tension, love the cliff-hanger.
ReplyDeleteUh-oh! Great ramping up of tension, sounds like some fighting is about to ensue, fun 6!
ReplyDeleteYou always cut it off at a point I'm dying for more! Great six! :)
ReplyDeleteSounds like an emotional betrayal at play...lots of fabulous tension.
ReplyDeleteOh, no fair! Now I need to read more. :)
ReplyDeleteOoh, lots of conflict there for sure. She definitely draws us into her dilemma, even without the context.
ReplyDeleteFist fight! I must see how this plays out. Love your six, Krystal.
ReplyDeleteYay! Guy fight! Guy fight!
ReplyDeleteYou packed a lot of action & tension in your six.
ReplyDeleteAnd the winner is... You! for a great six sentences
ReplyDeleteGreat six-hopefully it's all a misunderstanding.
ReplyDeleteMisunderstandings can leas to sooo much trouble.
ReplyDeleteoohhh... Leader is capitalised, maybe that was explained in previous installments but just a simple thing like that opens up so many intriguing possibilities. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteGood eye! Leader is capitalized and means soo much to this trilogy!
DeleteOoh. That's a fantastic six.
ReplyDeleteThis is one of my favorite parts! (I am so predictable ... always with the romantic drama, LOL).
ReplyDeleteOoh, do I sense some romantic hostility here? Two guys - one girl? Great six!
ReplyDeleteThe present tense is remarkably fresh. Well done!
ReplyDeleteI like it Krystal. Well done.
ReplyDeleteSharita L aka Michale Mandrake/BL
Ah! How could you leave us hanging there, lol! Fantastic six!
ReplyDeleteVery fun! Imagination is hooked!
ReplyDeleteI do want to see how this plays out! And yeah, quite a teaser to leave us like that. Great six!
ReplyDeleteAnd of course I want to know what she did and what they did and what he's gonna do. Of course!
ReplyDeleteOh wow. Very tense.
ReplyDelete:) :)
ReplyDeleteTalk about arrogance - and cowardice on her part. Powerful six, Krystal. :)
ReplyDeleteMore please!! :D Great six!
ReplyDeleteUh oh! This is not going to end well.
ReplyDeleteOuch--nice, Krystal! Good set-up of tension. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteDefinitely curious about what's going on here. Great tension:)
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