Sunday, January 29, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday

I'm rocket propelling you guys through the book. Today's excerpt comes from one of the later chapters where Kate's world spirals even further out of her control.

I'm not going to give you a set up . . . I'll leave it all to your imagination.

Enjoy!

~ "How could you?" Brad asks, keeping his gaze focused on Arland.

Without a doubt I know Brad is talking to me, but I cannot find the words to respond, cannot find the courage to speak to the guy who’s always been there when I needed him. His question I expected, but this fight I did not.

"When you calm down, she will answer you." Arland’s words ooze with confidence, revealing again why he is a Leader.

A dark look, full of contempt, passes over Brad; he reaches back, preparing to take a swing. ~

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61 comments:

  1. Is this a love triangle I am sensing? Sighs heavily. Must we stop here?

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    1. Yes, we had to stop there. Don't want to get in trouble with the six sunday crew. ;-)

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  2. What tangled webs we weave...

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    1. Oh I do agree! It only gets more intricate. ;-)

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  3. Uh oh! Great tension and conflict. I have no idea what your book is about but you've managed to emotionally invest me with just a few words. Great six!

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    1. I am so glad to hear that! My book will be available soon. And you can check out the blurb under the My Books tab. justsayin. ;-)

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  4. Ooooooo what's next? What's next?! lol

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    1. Well only about another 100 pages of a novel filled with betrayal, magic, love, and loss. YAY! hahaha

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  5. I'm echoing the OOOOOOOOOOOO Looking forward to reading more.

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    1. Well maybe I'll run a continuation next week?

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  6. I'm back! I have awarded you the Kreative Blogger Award! :D http://wp.me/p1QtlR-xU

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    1. You are awesome! Thank you! :-)

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  7. Hot-blooded men fighting... Where's more??? :)

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  8. Sounds like we're in the middle of a brouhaha. Loved your six!

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    1. Definitely a bit of a brawl. ;-)

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  9. Uh no! A fist fight! Nice job :-)

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  10. Oh, those male egos! Great buildup!

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    1. Men can be CRAZY when it comes to a woman...especially if one of those men is under influence of a dark source. Muahahha.

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  11. Very intriguing! I like the dark look passing over him.

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    1. It all goes downhill from there! Thanks Ruthie!

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  12. well done! makes me definitely want to read more

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    1. I'm here every Sunday...and the book willl be released soon. :-)

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  13. Nice six, I love where you cut us off.

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    1. What happens next might surprise you.

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  14. I'm not sure why, but I think I want to punch Arland myself! :-) Great job. Thanks for sharing!

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    1. NOOO! You definitely don't want to punch Arland. Brad on the other hand....

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  15. Getting more interesting every week. Amazing how you can watch the characters bloom, six sentences at a time.

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  16. I definitely like that you didn't use a set up because the scene speaks for itself, Krystal. Love the tension, love the cliff-hanger.

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  17. Uh-oh! Great ramping up of tension, sounds like some fighting is about to ensue, fun 6!

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  18. You always cut it off at a point I'm dying for more! Great six! :)

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  19. Sounds like an emotional betrayal at play...lots of fabulous tension.

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  20. Oh, no fair! Now I need to read more. :)

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  21. Ooh, lots of conflict there for sure. She definitely draws us into her dilemma, even without the context.

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  22. Fist fight! I must see how this plays out. Love your six, Krystal.

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  23. Yay! Guy fight! Guy fight!

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  24. You packed a lot of action & tension in your six.

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  25. And the winner is... You! for a great six sentences

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  26. Great six-hopefully it's all a misunderstanding.

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  27. Misunderstandings can leas to sooo much trouble.

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  28. oohhh... Leader is capitalised, maybe that was explained in previous installments but just a simple thing like that opens up so many intriguing possibilities. Thanks for sharing.

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    1. Good eye! Leader is capitalized and means soo much to this trilogy!

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  29. Ooh. That's a fantastic six.

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  30. This is one of my favorite parts! (I am so predictable ... always with the romantic drama, LOL).

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  31. Ooh, do I sense some romantic hostility here? Two guys - one girl? Great six!

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  32. The present tense is remarkably fresh. Well done!

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  33. I like it Krystal. Well done.

    Sharita L aka Michale Mandrake/BL

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  34. Ah! How could you leave us hanging there, lol! Fantastic six!

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  35. Very fun! Imagination is hooked!

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  36. I do want to see how this plays out! And yeah, quite a teaser to leave us like that. Great six!

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  37. And of course I want to know what she did and what they did and what he's gonna do. Of course!

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  38. Talk about arrogance - and cowardice on her part. Powerful six, Krystal. :)

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  39. More please!! :D Great six!

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  40. Uh oh! This is not going to end well.

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  41. Ouch--nice, Krystal! Good set-up of tension. Thanks for sharing!

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  42. Definitely curious about what's going on here. Great tension:)

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