Sunday, January 22, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday

Well it's time for another installment of Six Sentence Sunday. This week I'm going to dump a fiery red-head, a hunky hero, and ah . . . um . . . Kate on you.

Arland has just served up two bowls of slop prepared by Flanna with a little help from magic. The food looks terrible, but is surprisingly yummy. And if you read the bit about Kate and Arland going into the washroom together, and how Flanna gave Kate a hard time about that, (See SSS entries here and here ) then you'll know exactly what Kate is talking about here. ;-)

Enjoy!

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Lowering my voice so Flanna doesn’t overhear, I say, "Oh and I don’t think she’s going to give you hell about the bath."

"Oh?"

"She already gave it to me."

"I knew my cousin would not let us off easy." Arland laughs and takes another huge bite of Flanna’s Surprise.

On cue she walks into the dining area, hands up in surrender, eyes big and demure.

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38 comments:

  1. You had me at 'fiery red-head'. Nice six sentences! Happy Sunday.

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    1. Did you miss her big debut a couple weeks ago? She's a firecracker! :-)

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  2. Always a strong six sentences, love reading them each week.

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    1. Thank you, Robert! :-) I'll keep posting them just for you!

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  3. Such a playful scene. Great snippet!

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    1. When Flanna is around there's usually lots of fun!

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  4. Fun! I like "hands up in surrender, eyes big and demure."

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    1. She's such a trouble maker, but in a good way. :-)

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  5. I love dinner scenes.

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    1. Yeah why is it that people are always more fun at dinner?

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  6. Flanna's surprise - ha ha! Did she happen to create flan? ;) Great six this week! The best conversations always happen over food.

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    1. Haha, Melissa. Now that would be silly. ;-)

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  7. Fantastic work painting the scene. Well done.

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  8. I love how the "slop" has morphed into Flanna's Surprise. LOL

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    1. I left out the line of how the slop transformed into meat and potatoes. ;-)

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  9. Oh, yeah. Flanna's a minx all right. Great six, Krystal. I love your characters!

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    1. Thank you! :-) There are so many others I still have to introduce, but these three are the best in this book.

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  10. The banter and play amongst these characters is so enjoyable. :) Loved the six, Krystal.

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    1. Thank you, J.M. :-) I'm really glad you enjoy them.

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  11. Enjoying the dialog, makes me feel like I'm there with them AND I want to read more. Terrific snippet!

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    1. Thank you. You'll be able to read more soon. Book will be published in the next few months. Don't have an exact date yet though. :-)

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  12. Nice banter in this snippet.

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  13. I love how she needles them! Great six here - can't WAIT for this one to be published!

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    1. You know Flanna. She's always got something to say. :-)

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    1. Mmmm. Meat and potatoes. :-)

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  15. Lots of fun! Leaves me wanting more. Well done! :)

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    1. Thanks, Jessica. More to come soon. ;-)

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