Well, it's that time again. For those of you who enjoyed last week's six, you may find this intriguing as well. It doesn't pick up from the exact place I left off, but in the same chapter. My trio's little world just turned upside down and they are in for an even ruder awakening.
~ I take slow breaths, in and out, force the visions to the back of my brain and open my eyes into this strange, dark place. Brad helps me to my feet and holds onto my hand, steadying me. There is no moon, there are no stars above our heads, no street lights, nothing but darkness. Our flashlights—providing the only light that can be seen—lie on the ground, shining on something approaching. What I see doesn’t make any sense; the beings before us must be remnants of the visions I’ve experienced. But I see the panic on Brad and Brit’s faces and know the beings are real. ~
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Sunday, September 4, 2011
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Scary six, good job.
ReplyDeleteGood job of creating a frightening, almost claustrophobic atmosphere with this.
ReplyDeleteGood tension. I can really feel their fear.
ReplyDeleteSix sentences only??!! You're such a tease. Me want more.
ReplyDeleteVery intriguing. I love the "visual" of strange beings approaching in the scant lights of the flashlights. Great Six!
ReplyDeleteAmy Durham
So eerie. Great description.
ReplyDeleteAwesome. And in only 6 sentences.
ReplyDeleteNice bit of calm before the storm. Eeep!
ReplyDeleteLovely build up of tension and atmosphere - six of the best:)
ReplyDeleteCan't comment. Too scared and my head is under my blanket.
ReplyDeleteSuch tension. Nice six.
ReplyDeleteFeels very real. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteA nice six, Krystal!
ReplyDeleteVery creepy. Good six!
ReplyDelete...if the flashlights are on the ground, they wouldn't illuminate very far up, so how much of the beings can they actually see?
ReplyDeleteOoohhh what is approaching her? Wanna know now!
ReplyDeleteHey everyone! Just got back from vacation and saw all of your lovely comments. Thanks for visiting and I hope you'll tune in next week for more Six.
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