Sunday, January 6, 2013

Stuffed in the Trunk #SixSunday

Happy New Year! I hope everyone had a safe and wonderful holiday season. I know I enjoyed my family and friends and wish I were still sitting at home in my comfy chair! But . . . I'm not. Well, I probably will be by the time you're reading this.

This segment comes from Shattered Secrets, right after a strange man abducts Abigail Nichols from her family's front porch.

Enjoy!

I knew two things: my head hurt, and I was stuffed in the trunk of a car traveling down a bumpy gravel road. Dust floated all around me, the millions of tiny particles glowing red from the taillights. Someone's dirty laundry must have filled the duffel bag my head rested on; the smell would have cleared a skunk out of a room. My wrists were bound behind my back, and I was gagged.

Even if I could scream, my voice would have been useless. We were driving, probably in the middle of nowhere.~

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22 comments:

  1. Intense excerpt! Love the vivid detail and the way her fear is so real!
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  2. Poor Abigail . . . you trying to give your kid nightmares again;-)

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  3. Yikes, this sounds scary! Great description!

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  4. Nice imagery with the dust particles and I almost gagged at the skunk clearing reference. The humour did diffuse the tension somewhat but gave insight into the character of Abigail. Thanks for sharing.

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  5. This sounds really cool, Krystal! Good job. :) Love the dust imagery...

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  6. That's quite a predicament!

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  7. Wow, intriguing and VERY vivid description - excellent excerpt! I can't wait to read more.

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