Sunday, October 9, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

It's Halloween Season, so I thought I'd take us over to the Dark Side (insert evil cackle) this week.

Enjoy!

~He leans in, closes his eyes—

The sun disappears. The sky turns black. Emerging from the forest, gray beasts with hollow eyes surround and watch us. Before Arland can turn and fight, a mangled creature rushes forward and stabs him through the heart with a long, dagger-like claw.

My screams fill the darkness.~

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30 comments:

  1. ooh, scary! Now I won't be able to sleep.

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  2. That was the intention. ;-)

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  3. Ummm...eww! I wasn't expecting that at all. Poor guy, that's not a way I would want to go.

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  4. Well it's a creeptastic season (October), so it deserves creeptastic lines. Right? Right? ;-)

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  5. Very nice. In a creepy way, naturally.

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  6. Great six, perfect to tease in the season. Well done.

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  7. Just what I needed at 2am sitting alone in a quiet house. Thanks. lol

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  8. oooo and ouch! more please!! :)

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  9. Yikes and stuff! LOL. Fun, creepy 6.

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  10. Very Halloweeny. We need more than six lines on Sunday! It's just not enough. :)

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  11. Ah, great cliffhanger! Can't wait to read more!

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  12. Oh dear. I hope that's just a dream!

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  13. You will just have to read the whole thing to find out. ;-) Muahahahaha. (Geez, I'm really getting into this Halloween thing, aren't I?)

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  14. It's no less creepy in six sentences than it is in 100k+ words LOL! Hideous six. <<compliment

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  15. My goodness! That was creepy and totally chilling! Great job :)

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  16. Eek! I hope it's a dream, too. Nicely creepy.

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  17. Oh no! I hope it's a nightmare. :( Great six!

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  18. Oh, wow, intense six! Very timely. Nice job!

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  19. Cool! Love it! Giving me ideas for a dark fantasy story! Thanks! :)

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  20. Nice and creepy. Excellent!

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  21. Wow....that's right in with the Halloween theme. Nice and dark.

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  22. My scream would, too. Ouch!

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  23. Ooh...I sure hope that was just a bad dream...or vision. Love that it's written in the present tense!

    J.C.

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  24. Very Halloweeny :D Well done!

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  25. Eerily powerful. Great spooky six!

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  26. Oh, wow. Dark side, indeed! ;)

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  27. I am so glad everyone was creeped out by today's six. Hopefully you'll tune in next Sunday for more. Now I have to decide if I should keep up with the Halloween spirit. :-) (I'm still cackling.)

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  29. I LOVE a good scary story! I'll definitely be back for more.

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