Sunday, November 20, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Last week was a hit with Kate's honest expression of her feelings, but this week I wanted to share something with you all that shows a different side of her story. Pain.

I don't usually set-up my six, but this needs it. Kate has been told people recreate painful scenes from their lives on the walls . . . Enjoy.

~I walk over to the walls—running my hands across them as I did inside—inspecting some of the distressed art. One in particular stands out more than the others. A woman is impaled in her chest by a stake driven into the ground, a child with a sword in his hand curled at her feet. A dead monster lies next to them both. My hands shake. The person who experienced his mother’s tragic death in such a dreadful way is the one who must have drawn this.~

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50 comments:

  1. So sad. =c( Even out of the context of the story, it's painful to read.

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  2. Wow, very emotional. Well done!

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  3. Wow. That's quite an image. Makes you want to know who put it there. Nice 6, Krystal.

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  4. So very sad, Sarah. :-(

    Thank you, Jessica. Not as romantic as my last six but really captures the horrible details of this world.

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  5. The sadness that she felt was so strong, but also very real. I really enjoyed your creative description of her experience at the wall. This six left me with chills. :)

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  6. Thank you, Kristin. :-) Sorry to have given you chills, but if you're like me you probably enjoyed them. haha

    Thank you, Kelly. Trying to show my book has a dark side. (Luke, I am your father. - Oh dear, I should hit comment before I say anything else stupid!)

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  7. Star Wars quotes never go too far :) Nice six :)

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  8. Wendy, my son loves when I quote Star Wars!

    Thank you, Robb! :-)

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  9. That's intense and heartwrenching. I ached with her and the artist.

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  10. A vivid scene I can picture perfectly, with emotional impact.

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  11. Oh spooky, I enjoyed this. I love scary and creepy stuff.

    Onwards
    Michelle

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  12. how vivid. I really like this.

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  13. Wow, vivid six, Krystal. Thanks for sharing. :)

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  14. Heartbreaking. Very emotional six. Can't wait to read more.

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  15. Graylin, thank you for commenting. Hopefully your heart feeling better now. ;-)

    Thank you, Jessica. I love that you can see it. This scene was difficult to write...I had to capture so much devastation.

    Michelle, glad you like the creepy stuff. My book is full of things that make your skin crawl!

    Jayel, thank you! Keep coming back...I'll keep posting!

    Siobhan, you're welcome. Every Sunday! ;-)

    Sondrae, You'll be able to read more soon. This book has been accepted by a publisher!

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  16. Sad. I want to reach into the painting and just hug that poor kid. (and take the sword away) Nice and dark!

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  17. Great little tidbit, Krystal. Thank you for sharing, and congratulations on its forthcoming publishing! That is truly fantastic--will have a glass of wine to your success with dinner tonight :)

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  18. Quite intriguing! Sounds like you have a nice little plot here that I'd love to read. Nice job! ;-)

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  19. I'm with Melissa about wanting to reach into the picture! And that's so spooky! Even more so because it's unexpected on such a pretty pink page! ;)

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  20. Melissa, you can't steal his sword! He needs it! :-)

    Guilie, thank you for the congrats. Have three glasses of wine for me? UGH, long, exhausting day!

    Stacey, you can read it...soon!

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  21. JoAnn, my website better captures the dark essence of my novels. I'm working on a header change for my site...which will capture my books even better. I always love your comments! :-)

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  22. That wall sounds like a sad place.

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  23. It's a very sad place. The whole world is sad. :(

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  24. Very profound. This one really moved me.

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  25. Thank you, Ciara! This whole chapter is definitely intense. :-)

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  26. Wow, I don't think I'd like to see that wall. Nice job!

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  27. Very evocative. Great six!

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  28. The idea of this is so neat and chilling at the same time. It would definitely be a dreadful feeling standing in front of a wall filled with so much pain. Great six, Krystal.

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  29. Very painful to look at, Sandra.

    Thank you, Cherie!

    Thank you, JM. This wall took some major thought to create. Some of that thought disturbed ME and it was in MY brain. ;-)

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  30. Wow that is a powerful visual. I could sense the sadness in just six sentences! Great job Krystal :)

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  31. Oh, six is just never enough!

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  32. So sad. And so moving. You really reached in there today KRystal.

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  33. Had to show the dark side. :-) Thank you!

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  34. beautifully written emotion.

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  35. Love the concept of the pictures on the walls. Very sad.

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  36. Thank you. It's expressive. A way to overcome grief. :-)

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  37. Very evocative and haunting! Well done. :)

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  38. Thank you, Vivien. :-)

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  39. Gosh! That was so poignant and riveting! Great job :)

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  40. Agree with Amberr-six is never enough:)

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  41. Wow! Great imagery. I am already thinking about the back story.

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  42. Wow, intriguing snippet!

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  43. Thank you, Zee. I like the word gosh...such a me thing to say!

    Thank you, Louise. Soon you'll have 100k+ words to read!

    Gzidar, thank you. The back story is rather grim. :(

    Thank you, Gayle!

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  44. Very descriptive scene, Krystal. I like the use of multiple senses, nice six!

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  45. Very powerful image!

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