Sunday, November 13, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

For those who ventured over here last week and found I hadn't updated anything, I'm sorry. I was out of town, but now I'm back and hopefully have provided you with some amazing six sentence content.

This isn't a continuation from the exact place we left off, but it is in the same chapter.

Enjoy!

~“What did we do in these dreams?”

I stare at my hands, afraid to meet his eyes again—afraid he’ll laugh me out of the room, but I might as well lay it all on the line. If this is a dream it won’t matter, but if it’s real, well, he’ll know what he’s done to me. “We’ve fought side-by-side, worried for one another, laid in bed together for days, kissed passionately and loved each other deeper than could ever be true in reality. I’ve also seen you die dozens of different ways and found myself alone and broken each and every time. You are the only man I’ve ever loved with my whole heart.”~

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79 comments:

  1. I really like those last two lines! You are such a tease with your choices for SSS. :)

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  2. Awwwwwwwwww! <3 I love this one! Encore! :)

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  3. Lovely, involving clip.

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  4. Soulmates, with emphasis on soul and, um, mates. :) Nice.

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  5. Oh, so lovely. Great job!

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  6. Great six. Sounds like she had some vivid dreams!

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  7. Thanks guys. Have been out all morning but finally getting to comments.

    Paula-she's definitely had some crazy dreams. Some are pretty sad and scary.

    Thank you Carrie Ann.

    Ron-way important soul mates!

    Thank you kerrianne!

    Thank you for the comment and follow, Liz!

    Love that it made you go awwww, Connie!

    Thanks Kelly and Debra! I aim to tease! ;-)

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  8. So sweet! Now if he'd only GO FOR IT. LOL.

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  9. Haha, Sarah. Maybe he will! :-)

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  10. Aww, I love that last line. So sweet.

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  11. How sad that she's seen him die so many times and how beautiful that they keep coming together again and again.

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  12. Intriguing - really pulled me in. Now I want to know if it was really a dream or not...

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  13. Maybe I really am a romantic at heart, Melissa! ;-)

    Taryn, Very sad. It's been a weight on her for a long time.

    Cate, hopefully you'll have a book of mine to read really soon!

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  14. Wow. I totally *heart* this.

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  15. Wonderful writing!! Love this six. Thank you.

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  16. Aww! I heart that you heart this! Made my day! :-) Thank you for stopping by!

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  17. I love this. Excellent snippet. Love the emotion.

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  18. Thank you, Joanne. My dear Kate is pretty amazed. :-)

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  19. Oh, I hope somehow they are able to be together without her dreams becoming reality. Great six! :)

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  20. I hope so too, Jessica. I hope so, too!

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  21. Well intriguing snippet - I'll be back for more

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  22. Oh, I love those scenes--is it a dream, or real? Great Six!

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  23. Gemma, thank you so much!

    Sue, I'm so glad you'll be coming back! I'll keep posting!

    Kallypso, Thank you. You will just have to keep reading. :-)

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  24. Good dreams! I so hope he's going to respond to her in the right way! she took a risk sharing all that...want to read whatever is next. Excellent excerpt!

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  25. She took a huge risk. ;-) Thanks for reading and commenting!

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  26. Wow, hope they can break that cycle, the end of it anyway. Great six!

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  27. Very quickly engrossing. I really like how she explained the dreams. There's no mistaking how serious she takes the dreams. Can't wait to read more!

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  28. Okay. You gave me goosebumps! And believe me, after all these years I can't turn off my internal editor, so that's REALLY hard to do.

    THAT was worth waiting for!

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  29. Eleri, I hope so too! :-)

    JM, glad you were able to get into it so quickly. Hope you'll come back for more!

    JoAnn, what an incredibly kind thing for you to say. I love your reaction and I love how strongly you feel about it! Wonderful. Could move ME to tears!

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  30. Oh Wow. Very intense. I like it. :)

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  31. Thanks for stopping by, E.D. Glad you enjoyed. :-)

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  32. Awesome six, Krystal, and SO passionate! Can't wait to see what you give us next week! Happy Sunday!

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  33. Thank you, Stephanie. Glad you can feel that passion!

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  34. That was really great! Lots of emotion in there!

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  35. Thank you, Aimee. Kate is in quite an emotional state! :-)

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  36. I recognize your powerful words Katriona Wilde! ;)

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  37. :-) I think JKP is in love with this mysterious guy as well.

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  38. hum...... YES!!!!!!!!!

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  39. I knew it! You could never hide your love of him from me! ;-)

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  40. i know i need to find him in real life now... lol

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  41. Thank you, Justin!

    You will find him, JKP, you will! I promise.

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  42. Really great emotion in this six.

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  43. What a passionate six, Krystal! You could feel the emotion pouring from her soul. I loved the intensity! Well written! Kudos.

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  44. That's laying it all out there! Very emotional six!

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  45. She is laying it all on the line. I got nervous for her in just those six sentences. Well done, Krystal! :)

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  46. Thank you, Tarah.

    I got a new follower AND a blog comment from you all in one night, relatedreality. Awesome! thanks for visiting.

    Cherie, she definitely put herself on the line, huh?

    Siobhan, thank you. Maybe she'll regret those words later. Maybe not. :-)

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  47. Wow. Got me right in the heart,girlfriend. Love, love, love it!

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  48. Thank you, Diana! I'm so happy you stopped in and commented. I love this scene. I really do. :-)

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  49. Whoa, those are some intense dreams. I like this six. :)

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  50. Krystal, WHAT relatedreality said paraphrases what I would say about your fab-wonderful six.

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  51. Beautiful and haunting!

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  52. Thank you, Ranae! Definitely intense dreams. More than she could handle at times. ;-)

    Savanna, Thank you so much. Her comment was so wonderful, so that makes yours the same! Hahaha. Thank you for stopping by!

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  53. Thank you, Sarah. I'd definitely go with haunting. ;-)

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  54. OMG! This was so poignant, I had a lump in my throat, seriously! Very well written, Krystal. Great job :)

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  55. Definitely go with haunting, eh? Very intriguing six and I want to know what it's all about. Dream? Not a dream?

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  56. Wow, she's really opened herself up to him, hasn't she? Those sound like horrible dreams! Great six!

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  57. I loved the question and her heartfelt confession. It's so incredibly sweet. Great six!

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  58. Such horrible sad and yet beautiful dreams!

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  59. Zee, Thank you so much. :-) Sorry for the lump!

    Karysa, might force you to read the book to find out! ;-)

    JC, I guess when you've seen so much of someone (and in so many ways) it's hard to keep quiet. hehe

    Elyzabeth - Thank you. She's a heartfelt girl. ;-)

    LK, I love that you LOVE this.

    Lisa, exactly...her dreams were a mix of happiness and utter, horrible devastation. Perfect! ;-)

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  60. Wow! She's very bold to share. And how amazingly romantic it is.

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  61. Fantastic! You have me intrigued - about SSS. I will be back again and check them out!

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  62. Whew, these six really tugged at the heartstrings! Nice :D

    Kelly Said

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  63. So, NM, are you saying you like the SSS concept or my lines? ;-) Don't answer that.

    Kelly, thank you so much! :-) Very heated moment!

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  64. Oh, this is lovely and heart-wrenching all at once!

    I hope he's worthy of these dreams...

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  65. Wow, great six, Krystal! Can't wait to read more :)

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  66. Misa, he's definitely worthy!

    Lucy, I can't wait to share more with you! :-)

    Thanks guys!

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