Sunday, May 20, 2012

Who's In Charge? #wildesarmy #sixsunday

Today I'm flying back from my mini-vacation in Florida. Once I land, I'll be heading over to Nationals Stadium to meet my family for our first baseball game of 2012.

It's going to be a busy summer. I just know it!

Okay, now that you know I'm not actually around, here's today's set up. Kate is annoyed with Perth because he wants them to sit in the open (and if you've read Wilde's Fire, you know how dangerous being in the open is) and wait for the "right" time to head out to rescue the others.

She's basically just said, let's go now, and he abruptly changes the subject.

Enjoy!

~Perth draws circles in the dirt with his finger. "When you were in your sister's mind, what did you see?"

"Why?" Propping my hands on my hips, I stare down at him the way my mom always did when she was punishing me.

He doesn't meet my eyes. "I want to see if you were given clues about the trap you want to run into."~

Yeah, trust is a BIG issue with these two. Do you think they'll ever get along?

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18 comments:

  1. Great Six Krystal! I'm on Chapter 8 of Wilde's Fire. I know i'm a painfully slow reader. grr. lol. I only get from about 1 am to 2 am to read each night before I pass out from pure exhaustion. I'm so proud of you. You're a self promotion machine. ;) So glad you got a mini vacation for all the work you have been doing.

    Mel

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    1. Thank you, Mel. Hopefully one of these days you find time to finish reading. :-)

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    2. I can't believe you were in Florida lol

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  2. Tension is good. I like it!

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    1. These two are just so much fun. :-)

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  3. Nice six... interesting bits of character reveal in the dialogue!
    Amy Durham

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  4. Damn it. Now I'm hoping Kate and Perth end up great friends. And I was enjoying hating the guy too! Great six.

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  5. Ha! Score one for Perth!

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  6. Good dialogue, and as Sarah's said, score one for Perth!

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  7. Great Six! Hmm... what will she say after Perth's remark, I wonder?!

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  8. Definitely intriguing, makes me want to know what will happen next. Great six!

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  9. I think they'll get along eventually, but it's going to take something big to force the trust issue into silence. The dialogue, the small details here really make this scene enjoyable. Great six, Krystal.

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  10. well neither trusts the other - so not an issue lol. I'm sure they'll work it out

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  11. Nice tension, Krystal! I love how pragmatic he is, he balances her nicely.

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  12. Great six, Krystal! You keep giving us just enough conversation to possibly start liking Perth...But I will not stray, I like Kate with Arland! ;)

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  13. Will they ever get along?? Hmmm. No. But maybe that is HOW they get along.

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  14. Sounds like he's forcing her to think.

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  15. Hands on the hips...I do that often. What does that say about me? :) Good stuff as usual, Krystal. :)

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