It's Halloween Season, so I thought I'd take us over to the Dark Side (insert evil cackle) this week.
Enjoy!
~He leans in, closes his eyes—
The sun disappears. The sky turns black. Emerging from the forest, gray beasts with hollow eyes surround and watch us. Before Arland can turn and fight, a mangled creature rushes forward and stabs him through the heart with a long, dagger-like claw.
My screams fill the darkness.~
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Sunday, October 9, 2011
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ooh, scary! Now I won't be able to sleep.
ReplyDeleteThat was the intention. ;-)
ReplyDeleteUmmm...eww! I wasn't expecting that at all. Poor guy, that's not a way I would want to go.
ReplyDeleteWell it's a creeptastic season (October), so it deserves creeptastic lines. Right? Right? ;-)
ReplyDeleteVery nice. In a creepy way, naturally.
ReplyDeleteGreat six, perfect to tease in the season. Well done.
ReplyDeleteJust what I needed at 2am sitting alone in a quiet house. Thanks. lol
ReplyDeleteoooo and ouch! more please!! :)
ReplyDeleteYikes and stuff! LOL. Fun, creepy 6.
ReplyDeleteVery Halloweeny. We need more than six lines on Sunday! It's just not enough. :)
ReplyDeleteAh, great cliffhanger! Can't wait to read more!
ReplyDeleteOh dear. I hope that's just a dream!
ReplyDeleteYou will just have to read the whole thing to find out. ;-) Muahahahaha. (Geez, I'm really getting into this Halloween thing, aren't I?)
ReplyDeleteIt's no less creepy in six sentences than it is in 100k+ words LOL! Hideous six. <<compliment
ReplyDeleteMy goodness! That was creepy and totally chilling! Great job :)
ReplyDeleteEek! I hope it's a dream, too. Nicely creepy.
ReplyDeleteOh no! I hope it's a nightmare. :( Great six!
ReplyDeleteOh, wow, intense six! Very timely. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteCool! Love it! Giving me ideas for a dark fantasy story! Thanks! :)
ReplyDeleteNice and creepy. Excellent!
ReplyDeleteVery intense six! :)
ReplyDeleteWow....that's right in with the Halloween theme. Nice and dark.
ReplyDeleteMy scream would, too. Ouch!
ReplyDeleteOoh...I sure hope that was just a bad dream...or vision. Love that it's written in the present tense!
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Very Halloweeny :D Well done!
ReplyDeleteEerily powerful. Great spooky six!
ReplyDeleteOh, wow. Dark side, indeed! ;)
ReplyDeleteI am so glad everyone was creeped out by today's six. Hopefully you'll tune in next Sunday for more. Now I have to decide if I should keep up with the Halloween spirit. :-) (I'm still cackling.)
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ReplyDeleteI LOVE a good scary story! I'll definitely be back for more.
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